Updated script

Here is the final version of my script, which has been changed in order to give a better indication of the nature of the two characters in the sequence from my film.

Jack Fisher

Murder Creek script

INT. OPENING SEQUENCE. VALERIE IS WALKING ALONG THE MAIN CONCOURSE OF THE ASH BUILING AT WYKE COLLEGE, WHEN SHE SEES HER BOYFRIEND CHICO SAT AT A COMPUTER ON THE RIGHT HAND SIDE OF THE CORRIDOR, THEN COMMENCES TO APPROACH HIM.

Valerie:

HEY Chico!

                                                                      

                                                                            Chico:

 HEY! Valerie, what are you up to later?

Valerie:

Nothing, why?

Chico:

                            Well I just wondered if you fancied coming out to MAKEOUT CREEK with me, I’ll pick you up at 7?

Valerie:

It’s a date.

EXT. ‘MAKEOUT CREEK’, A POPULAR HANGOUT FOR LOCAL TEENS. CHICO AND VALERIE ARE IN CHICO’S CAR. CHICO’S CAR IS THE ONLY ONE THERE, THE PLACE IS DESERTED.

CHICO

So here we are (long pause)

The water is so beautiful, like your eyes.

VALERIE

Cheesy (under her breath).

CHICO

[leans in to kiss Valerie]

VALERIE

What are you doing? Get off me!

What’s that in the window?

[looks towards the window]

CHICO

Come on, it’s just your mind playing tricks on you.

VALERIE

No there was definitely a face in the window.

EXT. VALERIE GETTING OUT OF THE CAR AND BEGINNING TO RUN AS SHE REALISES THE KILLER IS LURKING BEHIND THE CAR.

VALERIE

[screams as she runs away from the crazed killer and ends up falling and being stabbed by the killer]

CHICO

[Flees the car after witnessing the murder of Valerie, to be chased by the killer, falling to the ground after being struck on the back by his knife]

This new version of my script will be used when finishing the filming of my sequence.