REVISED TO DO LIST!

Before I can start filnming I must:
Do an animatric for my completed storyboard;
Complete my second version of my script and post it to my blog;
Organise the props I will be needing for my film and notify the actors I will be using of filming times and locations.

Updated Script

My previous dialogue wasn't very good, so I have decided to start a new screenplaty with improved dialogue. Here is my progress so far.

Jack Fisher

Murder Creek script

INT. OPENING SEQUENCE. CHICO LA MATTA IS GATHERING HIS BELONGINGS FROM HIS OCKER AT IN THE OAK BUILDING AT WYKE COLLEGE.

Enter Valerie Lovegood.

                                                              Chico:

 HEY! Valerie, what are you up to later?

Valerie:

Nothing, why?

Chico:

                            Well I just wondered if you fancied coming out to MAKEOUT CREEK with me, I’ll pick you up at 7?

Valerie:

It’s a date.

EXT. ‘MAKEOUT CREEK’, A POPULAR HANGOUT FOR LOCAL TEENS. CHICO AND VALERIE ARE IN CHICO’S CAR. CHICO’S CAR IS THE ONLY ONE THERE, THE PLACE IS DESERTED.

CHICO

(in a creepy tone)

It’s so deserted, pretty creepy.

VALERIE

Stop it, you’re scaring me,

(sits bolt upright)

what was that?

CHICO

What? I didn’t hear anything? It’s just your mind playing tricks on you.

VALERIE

This Week

Over the course of this week I have finished my storyboard, which I will be transforming into my animatrix on Friday. I will also be posting the final draft of my script later this week.