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Murder Creek script

INT. OPENING SEQUENCE. VALERIE IS WALKING ALONG THE MAIN CONCOURSE OF THE OAK BUILING AT WYKE COLLEGE, WHEN SHE SEES HER BOYFRIEND CHICO GATHERING HIS BELONGINGS FROM A LOCKER ALONG THE CONCOURSE.

Valerie:

HEY Chico!

                                                              Chico:

 HEY! Valerie, what are you up to later?

Valerie:

Nothing, why?

Chico:

                            Well I just wondered if you fancied coming out to MAKEOUT CREEK with me, I’ll pick you up at 7?

Valerie:

It’s a date.

EXT. ‘MAKEOUT CREEK’, A POPULAR HANGOUT FOR LOCAL TEENS. CHICO AND VALERIE ARE IN CHICO’S CAR. CHICO’S CAR IS THE ONLY ONE THERE, THE PLACE IS DESERTED.

CHICO

(in a creepy tone)

It’s so deserted, pretty creepy.

VALERIE

Stop it, you’re scaring me,

(sits bolt upright)

what was that?

CHICO

What was what?

VALERIE

There was a face in the window

CHICO

Calm down, it’s just your mind playing tricks on you.

VALERIE

No there was definitely a face in the window.

EXT. VALERIE GETTING OUT OF THE CAR AND BEGINNING TO RUN AS SHE REALISES THE KILLER IS LURKING BEHIND THE CAR.

VALERIE

[screams as she runs away from the crazed killer and ends up falling and being stabbed by the killer]

CHICO

[Flees the car after witnessing the murder of Valerie, to be chased by the killer, falling to the ground after being struck on the back by his knife]